August 2013, for the twice time I made a new story of my
school years. I just graduate from my junior high school , Alhamdulillah I can
continued my studied to my favorite senior high school in Bekasi. Need extra
struggle and perseverance so that I could get into this beloved school.
In the morning of my first day in my school, it was a freak
moment and very busy morning after my long holiday. I had orientation day until
next 3 days, I’m prepared as well for that to make me comfort and enjoy my
orientation. Cloth and equipment that requested by the orientation committee so
made me feel uncomfortable and annoyed. I went to school with my dad using
motorcycle, I feel embarrassed because everyone looking at me. When I arrived
in the front of my school there is straight line for new student to get in into
school and start the orientation. I went to the very back row, I walking and
passed so many student with a strange face for me. On the back of a row I just
looked a boy with a happy face and quite smile standing in the back. After I
stand behind this boy I want to ask and talk with him. With a smile that really
made me so annoyed he turn back his face,look at me, and just smile to me and
not answer my question. I just very hate and annoyed to this person, so I just
keep silent until get in to the school gate.
4 days later, after the closing of orientation the student
affair announce class for the new student and their will lead him to the class.
When the student affair announce the class I was prayed a lot because I want to
have so many good friends,with many beautiful friends,and quickly in my mind
not one class with the boy in the first day of orientation. But, when the
student affair lead me and my classmate to the class I look him, boy on the
first day in orientation. We met again and in the class I not look empty space
again the empty space is beside that boy. We sit together and then he just
smile like the first day of orientation. He was make me so confused, why he
always smile but he was not said anything. With a positive and brave mind I ask
him why he always like that. After he said the reason I just laughing a lot, I
think his manner is like that. He was told me that he had toothache so he just
smile when someone talked to him. He talk to me his name is Rifat and said
sorry because he can’t talk too much now. After he recovered from his toothache
he always talk very much and always make a joke, we always sing together when
the teacher was went out from the class, and we always go everywhere together. We
have tons in common. We both always happy when we are together, example when he
met me we always do our special handshake. Now, we are on the different college
I hope Rifat is still be a good person in Brawijaya University.
Good writing, Rija. There are opportunities for better writing. Overall, it's very good. SUPER DUPER!
ReplyDeletethat was such a cute story, like a love-hate relationship :3 anyway your writing and the flow of your story are good, good job!
ReplyDeletesoo cutee♥ your story is very funny and i must be lucky to be Rifat to have a friend like you(*≧▽≦)
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